Date: 2007-07-16 06:41 am (UTC)
This story was absolutely perfect.
The little scenes where you show Matt's life after the attacks were great, so subtly written, describing what happened and how he felt in very few words (I love it when an author can pull that off) - but for once, for me, the sex was the best part.
Usually, sex scenes don't do that much for me, but this one was so real, I actually... um... yeah. I think some put it delicately in fic as "heat pooling in my lower belly" or something like that. Damn. Just hot.
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